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(Name) opened her eyes. 'Where the fuck am I?' She thinks to herself. She looked around to try to figure out where she was. The place was dark so she could only see the gray, tile floor and the dark gray walls. as her eyes adjusted to the darkness she could see more things like the purple pod-looking-thing in the corner of the room, the desk with a weird looking computer on it, and the boy sitting in the chair at the desk.

"Uh...H-hello..." She said to the strange looking boy. The boy had gray skin, black hair, nubby-looking-candycorn-colored horns, eyes that were yellow where they should be white and red irises, a pair of simple gray slacks, black shoes, and...a red turtle-neck sweater?

"..." He didn't say much and her first impression of him was a cute, yet shy, alien boy who's planet you just woke up on.

'Shit. What do I say?!' (Name) asked herself.

"Greetings." He finally said.

(Name) looked confused as to how he can speak your language.

"My name is Kankri Vantas. And you are?"

"Er...M-my name is (First name) (Last name). N-nice to meet you Mr. Vantas..."

"The pleasure is all mine Ms. (Last name). I knew it would be terribly rude of me if I didn't introduce myself first, seeing as you have somehow appearifyed in my room."

She blanked out at the words. Not wanting to appear rude she just nodded her head.

"Since you appear to be hear for a while I will allow you to stay with me until you find a way home. but..."

(Name) knew a but was coming.

"You must at least be doing something productive while you are here."

"A-alright..." She agreed.

And there is where our story begins...

On a planet called Beforus...

Where a single human girl finds herself staying in one of the residents', know as trolls, "hives".

~~to be continued...~~
Since i've never seen one before i thought i'd be the first so...have at it! will add link to next one when i make it...might update every weekend...idk...

link to next: [link]

kankri: homestuck creator andrew hussie

you: you
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:iconlucia-lileth-vladmir:
Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Writer
ROOMIES!
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep
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:icontycaos-adexio:
Tycaos-Adexio Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013   General Artist
HOLY FLYING FREAKIN OREOS!
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:iconworld-detective-l:
World-Detective-L Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy muffins. I didn't know trollbook worked on DA.
I can make red Kankri text~
kankri: Red text~
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
eh?? can u tell me how then??
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:iconcapricornuss:
Capricornuss Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
omg my sissy :iconashleystar402: would love this!
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
apparently someone already told her. i hope she does!! :D
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:icongamzeerival12:
GAMZEErival12 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jdndjdjbejsmwsnff omg kankri!! Aww i wuv it cant wait!! :iconTrollhaveplz:
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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:icongamzeerival12:
GAMZEErival12 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:huggle:
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
er...sorry...but i have a matesprite...
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:icongamzeerival12:
GAMZEErival12 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thats good..me and eridan were like that..
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...
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:icongamzeerival12:
GAMZEErival12 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im jking
sorry i wuv your work ^w^
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ty ^u^
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:iconemo-kaylah:
Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
cxzdjkncbdjkzs soo good so far...just let me hug you chica for this amazing work!
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww...thanks for the hug!!
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:iconemo-kaylah:
Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Anytime ^^ and I can't wait for more~!
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it'll be this weekend when i'll be able to write more.
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Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Yay~:dummy:
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconemo-kaylah:
Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
If you don't mind me asking how would one write Kankri's personality because I really want to write a reader insert because you inspired me ^^
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just think go to homestuck's wiki page and look for kankri
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LoneTaku Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
I.....

I had a nice little few paragraphs pointing out small grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes but...

Oh god DAMMIT. This stupid deleted it.
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
f to the u

i'm not deleting my bby
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:iconlonetaku:
LoneTaku Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
I wasn't saying it was bad, I was just pointing out things to make it better. If my dumbass phone didn't delete he original comment you also would have gotten a paragraph of me rambling about how I don't want to upset anyone, I just want to help them be a little better.

That's all, geez...
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well i fixed some mistakes so it should be a bit better.
btw next chapter will be from readers perspective.
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:iconlonetaku:
LoneTaku Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Yay! And also sorry if at first I did sound a little bit rude, I tend to do that when I lose twenty things that took me an hour each in a row. *sweatdrop* next time I'll be more careful. :)
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karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay! ^_^
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DanuAvalonArtemis Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was like "dslkajlkjdf YEY KANKRI"
but
i died a little when i saw the quirk.

Here's a tip: Don't use typing quirks for fanfiction. You can if you want, but- trust me- it will turn off a lot of people reading it and they won't like it as much. (Me being one of those people.) Now, I like it. And a simple quirk like that, I could push through it. But you have those crazy fans out there who yell at stuff like this.

I'm sorry if I sounded rude in any way (I'm always afraid that I do) but I just wanted to save you from the crazy fans.
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll fix it
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DanuAvalonArtemis Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay
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ScarredCalamity Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student
when i was lookin threw my messages i was like "hmm...kankri x r- YEEEEESSS*click*" iluformakeingthis
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
TY!!!!
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:iconscarredcalamity:
ScarredCalamity Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student
no purroblem
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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ScarredCalamity Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student
:3
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:33
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GreyWolfFaolan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Finally for for Kankri :D
more please
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gotta wait a week
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:icongreywolffaolan:
GreyWolfFaolan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I can wait. :D
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well sorry to disapoint you but you MUST wait
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:icongreywolffaolan:
GreyWolfFaolan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
No i mean I can wait.
I'm looking forward to it.
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know. i'm teasing you.
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:icongreywolffaolan:
GreyWolfFaolan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
XDDD
Oki. ^^
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Moon-chan332 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whose kankri vantas?
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mspaint adventures. newest flash. make it happen.
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:iconmetagiga:
MetaGiga Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Karkat's extremely lovable ancestor that cannot shut up under any circumstances unless Terezi's awesome Tony Hawk skateboarding ancestor comes in
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Theif-Of-Heart Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist
Very cute! I can't wait to see what happenes! ^^
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:iconkarkatlover69:
karkatlover69 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and i hope you like it too.
i'm just making it up as i write it.
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